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technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. discuss both positive and negative aspects of this trend development.

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It is believe that technologies have changed the way
children
 spend their free time.
Although
 technologies have some disadvantages, I believe that these positive impacts are overshadowed by many adverse influences. I will discuss both positive and negative aspects of
this
 trend development. On the one hand, technologies can be seen as beneficial for several reasons.
Firstly
,
technology
 helps
children
 self-study because when using the internet, they can study by searing on some websites, take part in some free-if-charge online courses so as to enrich their knowledge and support them for study and work in the future.
Secondly
,
technology
 can be used for entertainment and save money purposes
such
 as: watch movies, download or listen to music without paying any charge
On the other hand
, I believe that the advantages of
technology
 eclipse its disadvantage. The main drawback is using
technology
 in free time will decrease the time
children
 spend for outdoor activities, they will be attracted by the electronic equipment,
this
 cause the limit in their physical development. Another downside of
this
 trend is that it effects badly to the physical health of
children
: eye drain, headaches, and stress. In conclusion, in spite of some positive effects on
children
’s playtime, I hold the opinion that the advantages are more than disadvantages: internet help
children
 make friends and chatting with other by using the social medias like Facebook, zalo, twitter, in order to open the relationship and improve social skills
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