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The graph below shows the estimated number of cars manufactured in 4 countries between 2020 and 2035.

The graph below shows the estimated number of cars manufactured in 4 countries between 2020 and 2035.
#cars #countries
The line graph gives information about how the exports of products in
Japan
, China, India and the USA from Australia. The units are measured in percentage of Australian export for a 22-year period from 1990.
Overall
, exporting the
quantity
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 of
things
 in
Japan
 and the USA followed
similarly
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 trends
in
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during the time.
It is clear that
 the same figure for China dramatically increased and
also
 India has got
marginally
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 growth for
this
 statistics. Looking at the details, in 1990, Australia exported
big
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a big
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 portion of
things
 to
Japan
, about 25. After that, imported
things
 to
Japan
was
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gradually decreased every year. Exporting
things
 to the USA
flactuated
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fluctuated
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 from 1990 to 2012. In the final year,
this
 figure
was
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reached about 17
to
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in
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Japan
 and just over 5
to
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for
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 the US,
in
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turn.
Remarkbly
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Remarkably
, exporting the products to China was very low
percent
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per cent
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 in the initial year. But
then
,
this
 trend significantly increased and reached the peak point
about
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 30. We can see
this
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 graph, India
still
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the
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 lowest side which was about 5 in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, things with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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