Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Thanks to medical development, it allows us to acquire knowledge of how

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with our

health

problems

and easily access to

alternative

medicines and

treatment

.

Therefore

,

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plenty of people opt for a replacement rather than making an appointment with their own

doctor

. Around

this

issue, there seems to be two different

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we could consider. Looking at

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first,

it is beneficial for those who have low profits to save money on hospital costs. Needless to

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that every country cannot set decent medical insurance. Each has its own circumstances.

Consequently

, in the case of nations that have poor conditions, a lot of individuals cannot afford to take any medical services. At that moment, what we need is a substitution which can avoid spending amount of financial

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.

For example

,

special

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diet

such

as having

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food, taking herbs, and utilizing aromatic drinking helps them to recover their

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quickly without

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the clinic

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.

Hence

, it is valuable to seek

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alternative

methods

instead

of a regular

doctor

.

Furthermore

, it encourages us to overcome not physical but

also

mental

health

problems

. Today’s society has been changing and evolving at a surprising speed.

Accordingly

, many people tend to feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.

However

,

alternative

therapies give us opportunities to relieve stress and promote mindset. In fact, a huge number of people can escape from their stressful

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through yoga, meditation,

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.

This

method provides us with other

pleasure

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that hospital

treatment

cannot give. If they had not

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this

means, it would be happened that a lot of patients suffer from feeling gloomy or exhausted in hectic life.

Thus

, it is necessary to take into account replacements

instead

of

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to the hospital.

On the other hand

, when it comes to negative viewpoints, we may consider that there would be missed a serious illness. If patients visit

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center

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on a regular basis, it is easy to know their disease in detail and

also

their usual

doctor

perceive

health

problems

that they have.

Moreover

, it is required to go to the regular hospital since

alternative

measures have some limits to

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their

health

issues. In general, substitutable medicines and

treatment

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treatments

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are more likely to be non-professional and inaccurate

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than asking their own doctors.

This

proves that

alternative

methods are risky to notice a major illness. Another part I want to point out is that

health

problems

may get worse if we don't go to the hospital and accept

treatment

as an

alternative

. From my experience, when I got burned, I chose

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acupuncture

for

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cure the wound.

However

, I failed to remedy the wound so I ended up visiting

to

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the hospital I used to go and

then

I was able to heal the burn perfectly. Because of

this

experience, I realized that if I have any

health

problems

, I have to go to

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I can trust first.

As a result

, it is better to visit a

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doctor

. In conclusion, the two possible choices have their own reasons. Using replacements rather than visiting a specialist can give us financial benefits and merits for recovering mental

health

.

However

, in order to prevent

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losing a serious illness and deteriorating their wounds, it is beneficial to go to the hospital they visit frequently.