‏Every year thousands of students go overseas to study. Although many benefit from the experience, others go home disappointed. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying in another country?

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abroad is always considered

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a dream

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everyone. It is often argued that

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overseas

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more cons compared to the pros.

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, as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far as I’m concerned, I truly feel that

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abroad indeed

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graduates to receive a higher job opportunity but

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drawbacks shouldn’t be denied.

Firstly

,

students

manage to improve their knowledge by exposing to different types of cultures in that country. Not only

this

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but

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student gains a crucial opportunity to learn a new type of foreign language. Learning a new language is not always a bad idea as it might be useful in the future workplace. Moving forward, it is understandable that most of the prestigious universities are

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overseas. So, the

students

will receive a higher qualification

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and eventually open a new door to secure

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job

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with a higher wage and welfare in the future.

Although

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abroad contains multifold advantages,

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drawbacks shouldn’t be denied. A common criticism is that

students

might have the

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to develop homesickness because of missing

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their family members.

Besides

that, it has

also

been proven that the cost of living in a different country is way higher compared to our own country and

this

will create a burden towards the families and the

students

.

For example

, international

students

would apply to work as a part-timer in order to mitigate the cost of living and sometimes it will lead to an in-cooperate with their own

study

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Lastly

, some international

students

have even reported that they did face difficulty when communicating with the local people

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the discrepancy between

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culture and language background. In conclusion, despite the drawbacks of studying abroad,

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I personally believe that

study

in overseas will improve the student’s qualification profile unfortunately

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one of the main concerns

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every family.