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In some countries , the government promote public transportation and discourage the private vehicles what are the advantage and disadvantages?

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In many countries,
communting
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commuting
 by public
transport
 is
encouraged
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 than driving personal cars. There are both negative and positive impacts to
this
 matter.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the coin.
To begin
, one of the benefits of using buses is that it reduces the
noise
 pollution
that is
 being experienced on most busy roads. As early as 4 AM, the
noise
 caused by motorists
wake
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wakes
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 up
resisdents
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residents
 residing
along side
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alongside
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 the road.
For example
, living in areas close to motorways is a nightmare.
People
 do not get to have enough rest because of the constant
noise
by
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of
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 motorists. Using buses will save those living in those busy areas by having time intervals between buses.
The
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Secondly
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secondly
, it reduces the traffic jam. Driving in the morning has become unbearable, it can take up
an
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 hour to get to an area where if not so many cars it would only take about half an hour. Residents need to plan ahead to avoid the congestion.
Therefore
, the use of public
transport
 lessens the number of cars on roads, reduces the
noise
 and makes travelling smooth.
On the other hand
, restricting
people
to
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from
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 using one kind of
trasnsport
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transport
 limits their freedom and comfort. The commuter will have to rush in order to catch the train at a particular time.
As a result
, the trains become so crowded because there are hundreds of
people
 trying to catch the same train.
This
 causes discomfort in some
people
 that they find it hard to cope.
In addition
, using public
transport
 is becoming more expensive. The commuters are required to pay full fares including tax.
This
 is expensive compared to using private
transport
.
However
, for these two reasons, it is better for
people
 to own a car. In conclusion, discouraging the use of private
transport
 has both drawbacks and
advatanges
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advantages
. The use of public
transport
 will reduce traffic congestion and
noise
 pollution.
However
,
people
consequently
suffers
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 the rise in expenses and discomfort.
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