Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve search situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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argued that

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should approve some kind of conditions, including

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dissatisfaction or

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shortage,

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, others believe that would be better to change

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approach. Both views put forward a valid point,

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in my opinion, the latter would be productive. Nowadays,

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would like to become successful in their personal and professional life.

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mind helps them receive a

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of satisfaction with themselves, which has a positive effect on their

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health. When individuals could not fulfil their ambition, they are more likely to lose their passion and motivation, and could not carry out their tasks appropriately.

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leads to slacking off in their

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and being more likely to be fired.

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,

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who get minimum wages or have a shortage of

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are unable to fulfil their dreams,

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as buying cars, their children's needs or going to travel . So,

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act brings their family members a

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of unsatisfactory, and those

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run into serious problems in their relationships.

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, most of the

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, who try to make a term develop their condition are more likely to get satisfied.

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, if they quit a

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and find a rewarding and well-paid

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, they are more likely to conduct an excellent

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. being satisfactory in their

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, bringing rise to being a good team player and afterwards, they will be got raise and promotion. having more

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and having a

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of satisfaction, help them to provide their family members with more suitable facilities, including a suitable house or insurance.

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, those adolescents would be more fulfilled and happy in their life process and I think

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an efficient approach. In conclusion, several

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would be unsatisfied with their

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and earn less

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, in my viewpoint

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sensible to change their career and try another opportunity to become progression, which leads to supplying their family needs and having a

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of reward.