The maps show changes over a 30 period from 1990 to today
The maps below illustrate changes that took place in the period of time from 1990 until these days.
To compare two different maps, namely from 1990 and modern respectively,
It is clear that
nowadays the general arrangement of facilities was changed dramatically.
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To begin
with, it is essential to emphasise that in the middle of the map lies a new pond. It is not occupying a large territory, notwithstanding we can see it.
To delve into other facilities, It is evident that pass through the street “Hill Road” can be seenLinking Words
a
bike path. Change preposition
as a
Moreover
, near the junction of two streets, namely College Avenue Street and Hill Road Street, we can see that Women’s Dormitory was converted to the “Men’s Dormitory”. Linking Words
However
, the former had been relocated to the east side of the map. To delve into the zone around the Athletic Fields, we can mention that its area was rebuilt dramatically with a number of different facilities.Linking Words
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