The line graph presents information about the percentage of people who used the internet in three various countries over a period of 10 years.
The line graph presents information about the percentage of people who used the
internet
in three various countries over a period of 10 years.
Overall
, from the ,figure it is clear that
the proportion of internet
users in each country saw a significant rise over the period shown. Moreover
, Canada experienced the fastest growth in internet
usage.
In 1999, the proportion of internet
users in the USA was about 20%. The figure for Canada and Mexico were at about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, Internet
usage in both The USA and Canada experienced significant growth to around 70% of the population, while
Mexican internet
users reached just under 25%.
By 2009, Canadians reached a peak of almost 100%, compared to approximately 80% of Americans. Also
, there was a gradual rise in Mexicans only 40%.Submitted by iielts998 on
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