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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

#happiness #life #factors
Since ancient times,
people
 have been trying to understand what
happiness
 is. Actually, it is a very undefine thing and at the same time very clear thing. What does make
people
 feel happy? How is it important for them? Everyone has
personal
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 definition of
happiness
, which depends
of
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 many things and changes during
all
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our life. When you are
kid
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a kid
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, small events like
box
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 of candy or
bicycle
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a bicycle
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 for
birthday
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 make you happy. With age, other exciting things like first love or work promotion force your heart
tremble
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. Whatever it is, it has a lot of different forms and ways to achieve. Obviously, one of the main things that
people
 use to measure
happiness
 is a family. Very often a man, who has
numbers
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 of relatives, is considered
as
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a lucky guy.
Nevertheless
, family is a strong basis of life
as well as
 children. They love you and support you in complicated circumstances, they rejoice in your successes and are sad about your failures,
also
 they are with you at birth and at death. Nowadays many
people
 concentrate their lives around business and friends. They spend years
for
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studying and
then
work
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 hard to build
professional
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a professional
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 carrier.
That is
 why work’s achievements
makes
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 them really happy.
Moreover
, thousands of physicians and teachers, rescuers and scientists dedicate their lives to serving
people
 and in
this
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 they find their source of true
happiness
.
Besides
 that, friends and social activity occupy an important place in
people
’s lives and
allows
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allow
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 them to understand that they are needed and in demand. Summing up, the concept of
happiness
 has always caused controversy and disagreement. No one will ever say exactly what
this
 term means. You can only feel it in yourself, realize that you are in
such
 a unique state of mind, in which you have never been before. And only when you understand
this
, you can say that you are happy.
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