The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected these regions of the world the 1990s

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected these regions of the world the 1990s
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The given pie chart depicts the major causes why agricultural
land
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grows unproductive, and the given table illustrates how these reasons influenced particular regions in the world namely North America, Europe, and Oceania throughout the 1990s.
Overall
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, over-grazing was the most contributor to
land
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degradation contributing 35,
while
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other reasons were the least by giving 7% of global unproductive
land
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. Meanwhile, Oceania was the highest percentage of
land
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degraded by over-grazing which was 11,3% in 13% in total globally. Next North America was the lowest percentage of
land
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degraded for three main causes. Looking in detail,
it is clear that
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even though the Deforestation percentage was lower than over-grazing, it was the main cause affected in Europe as the highest region got a total
land
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degraded worldwide. Compared with Oceania, which contributed only 1,7% to deforestation, was impacted by over-grazing 11,3% as the biggest cause. Other than that, North America as the least area which was influenced by three reasons agricultural
land
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becomes unproductive was dominated by over-cultivating
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