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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #animals #zoos
It is argued that keeping
animals
 in
zoos
 brings about not only entertainment but
also
 ecological importance . Whether
this
 opinion is true has drawn
a
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significant attention ;
therefore
, in my point of view, I believe that
animals
 should not be kept in
zoos
.
To begin
 with , I oppose
against
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the denoted issue for some of the reasons as follows.
First,
instead
 of being adopted by
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zoos
,
animals
 can be conserved in our national parks for better habitats. To be specific, in
the
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zoos
, the habitat for each species can be limited inside a four-wall small
concreate
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 box.
Second,
several species spending their lives in
zoos
 have been losing their instinct to cope with natural danger and challenges. Obviously, they cannot find food by themselves as
accomplishedly
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accomplished
 as the wild
animals
 can ;
besides
, they do not even know how to find a
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.
Lastly
 and clearly,
animals
 must not be kept in
zoos
 to entertain us,
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human beings .
On the other hand
, there are numerous agreements around the mentioned viewpoint . Apparently,
animals
 can be safer
while
 kept in
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zoos
.
For instance
, if they freely live in the wild, especially the newborn ones, they can easily be hunted by predators or even worse,
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poachers.
In addition
, to protect them in
zoos
, we have to pay for
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enormous expenses
such
 as human resources, food, artificial habitats, etc.
To sum up
, there are various controversial thoughts around the denoted topic which I disapprove
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