Some people think that libraries are a waste of resource and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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some people believe that

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and libraries are not much useful meanwhile

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and technology are more efficient.

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situation deeply impacts the illiteracy of the economy.in

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writing discuss the opinions

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the following reasons. it is often discussed but rarely understood that

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have no liabilities it can keep remain as it is for long years. despite the fact that it a very generous source of gain knowledge which gives no pressure on your human eyes

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reading more portable and easy to carry a source of getting information ,

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library is very convenient

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easy to access for all age group of people. for ,example all community colleges and schools present free access to library

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and newspapers for young teenagers in every city. on the other ,hand desktop

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and tech-related things are not healthy to approach for everybody it may cause harm to the human brain and cornea in hours of sitting

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it is a quick method to gather information ,

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it requires maintenance costs. in fact, computer machines can replace some aspects of paper

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but not every point can them cover.

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the machine requires space to keep internally and externally,

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these

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need restrictions of access for young children. As far as I am concerned with

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which gradually encourage them to play games and do unusual activities. In conclusion,

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are very fast and vast technology for growth everyone needs it,

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and libraries equally maintain the balance between the two sides I strongly disagree with the opinion to replace the library with

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resource and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Your opinion

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