The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The given map informs about the transformation of the garden
in particular
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spots by adding new facilities and buildings between 1980 and now.
Overall
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, there are some spaces which are transformed into new areas. In 1980, there were fewer public facilities than in the present.
Also
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, there are some new fields built now. In detail, the clear change happening in the area is the flower garden in 1980, which has been replaced into a playground.
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, the number of benches in the past located on the left side of the picture was fewer than that nowadays. Now, on the right corner of the map, there are some new facilities
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as chairs, desks, and barbecue, where in the past there were only trees.
Furthermore
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, the space full of flowers in 1980 located on the left bottom of the map was changed by a bush. The gates of the road don't exist now and there are new ways constructed without gates in order to connect the areas' sides.
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, the thing
that is
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still maintained from 1980 to now is a pond area with benches placed even at the same spot.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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