Some people believe that only the government can bring about significant changes in society, while others think that even an individual can have a lot of influence on society. What is your opinion on the above statement?
In these globalized world, we the
People
and we the government
have mutually reinforcing rolls and array of people
are give that only Government
can invite better changing society
mean While
other people
claim that not only government
but one can also
bring change in society
in approaching segment ,both view and opinion will be analyse the for most reason why some human kind believe that only government
can convert Nation in better track because authority has power to substitute better terms for the citizen for the nation for the day may know how to control the country ifenation is dropping down not only that but administration can motivate youngsters to work hard for this
successful career by giving them various education schemes or giving them opportunity to study abroad by landing the helping hand for example
if government
announced about financial support to needy people
or elderly people
or may provide more job opportunity breakdown the unemployment rich in country in this
way government
can help society
on the one hand a bunch of people
considered that a single can also
switch community to Superior part by performing that duty towards that country if an individual pay taxes on time or by doing social work for the surrounding already people
that gradually society
may achieve their goal the former reason if public will pay taxes and given period then
government
can help the poor people
or me developed the nation where there is need For Example
if one student donate to Charity or joins social work or giving free education to poor people
in this
way poor kid may get basic education and it encourages them to learn more and may they achieve there goals. From my perspective, it is not only the duty of Administration but it is the duty of a human also
to support and contribute to a better society
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