Some people believe that only the government can bring about significant changes in society, while others think that even an individual can have a lot of influence on society. What is your opinion on the above statement?

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In these globalized world, we the

People

and we the

government

have mutually reinforcing rolls and array of

people

are give that only

Government

can invite better changing

society

mean

While

other

people

claim that not only

government

but one can

also

bring change in

society

in approaching segment ,both view and opinion will be analyse the for most reason why some human kind believe that only

government

can convert Nation in better track because authority has power to substitute better terms for the citizen for the nation for the day may know how to control the country ifenation is dropping down not only that but administration can motivate youngsters to work hard for

this

successful career by giving them various education schemes or giving them opportunity to study abroad by landing the helping hand

for example

government

announced about financial support to needy

people

or elderly

people

or may provide more job opportunity breakdown the unemployment rich in country in

this

way

government

can help

society

on the one hand a bunch of

people

considered that a single can

also

switch community to Superior part by performing that duty towards that country if an individual pay taxes on time or by doing social work for the surrounding already

people

that gradually

society

may achieve their goal the former reason if public will pay taxes and given period

then

government

can help the poor

people

or me developed the nation where there is need

For Example

if one student donate to Charity or joins social work or giving free education to poor

people

this

way poor kid may get basic education and it encourages them to learn more and may they achieve there goals. From my perspective, it is not only the duty of Administration but it is the duty of a human

also

to support and contribute to a better

society

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Some people believe that only the government can bring about significant changes in society, while others think that even an individual can have a lot of influence on society. What is your opinion on the above statement?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. So, companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right exclude males and females from certain professions because of their genders?