The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 to 2018.
The given chart displays the
number
of newcomers shops
opening in a country and the number
of closed shops
from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the highest opening of the new shops
happened in 2011 and the lowest was in 2018. 2013 was the highest year for shops
closed and the lowest was 2015.
The first line shows, In 2011, the number
of new shops
started at 8500 and extremely decreased in 2012 to 4000. Two years later, the statistic rose to 6100 and fell to 4000 in 2015, the same number
as 2012. However
, the number
was stable between 2015 to 2016 but slightly increased in 2017 before falling again in 2018 at 3000. The second line illustrates the statistic began at 6300 in 2011 and rose to 7100 in 2013. Between 2013 and 2015, the number
decreased to 2015, which was the lowest in history. Moreover
, in 2015 closed shops
increased to 5100, slightly decreased to 500, and in 2018 rose to 5100. Both lines meet the exact line between 2011 and 2012. In 2014, both lines almost met the same number
and intersected between 2005 and 2016. Meanwhile, the number
of people opening and closing shops
fluctuated, but the same characteristic that happened to both was the number
decreased in 2018.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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