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The pie chart below shows the average household expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie chart below shows the average household expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.
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The pie charts give information about household expenditure on goods and services between 1950 and 2010. The proportions between 1950 and 2010 are different. In 2010, housing plummeted from 72.1% in 1950 to 22.0% in 2010. Food in 1950 climbed to 34.0% in 2010. Health care rose at a slower pace from about 2.4% to 4.5%. In 1950, education fell gradually more than about 0.3 per cent. Transportation soared clearly from 3.3% to 14.0% a growth of approximately 10.7%. The
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 other one in 1950 has just 4.4% less than in 2010 around 19.2%, it rise of around 14.8%. In between two years, some things decline some things rocketed,
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 In 1950 housing, food, health care, transportation and others rose in 2010, but only one education fell in 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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