More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?

In many societies these days, some people are concerned about a lot of measures to security issues in vast cities around the world. The reason why is that

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the rate of crime has increased sharply. The goal of

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essay suggested about advantages outweigh more than disadvantages. First of all, there are a lot of megapolises, which have problems with crimes

such

as

bulgary

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burglary

bulgar

or shop-lifting.

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the

goverments

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governments

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include

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new laws, which introduce that in all public areas, including restaurants,

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and schools, police should use

cameras

. Most

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cameras

include

artifical intellegence

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artificial intelligence

, which is extremely popular nowadays.

In addition

to it, policemen

also

may use robots and bots, it

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to work

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policeman

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more effectively and

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.

As a result

, the police can react immediately to

commite

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commit

a crime.

Finally

, technology may determine your race, age or

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of

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. Plus, it can take photos or

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.

On the other hand

, some individuals strongly believe that

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cameras

based on AI and bots affect

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people

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freedom and choices.

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may just walk on the street and

cameras

take photos or video on 24/7 format. On top of that,

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personal data may use not only for security issues

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but

also

for

control

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population

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by

autorities

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authorities

. In conclusion, most

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people suppose security

cameras

are necessary

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on

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big living areas.

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measures may help to decrease

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number of

crime

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crimes

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.

In contrast

, others strongly believe that

cameras

should be forbidden in the modern world. Taking everything into consideration

cameras

have more benefits