Q: Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?

It is true that physical activities play

crucial

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role in our healthy lifestyle.

However

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residents living in modern cities spend a huge amount of

time

for

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their

works

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work

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and studies substitute version of physical

exercise

.

This

essay will discuss the reasons

of

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this

condition and

also

will state some possible remedies.

To begin

with, nowadays the number of

people

who do not pay attention to their health is increasing. One of the most significant

reason

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for

this

situation is that nowadays

people

work non-stop and without any breaks. Working in

this

way is causing

people

to have no

time

to

exercise

and

create

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some issues which

is depend

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on

people

's health.

In addition

, another cause of

this

condition is

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the improvements of new technologies

such

as mobile phones, robots and

also

automatic implements.

That is

these gadgets have caused individuals to almost stop physical movement. And

also

young children prefer different video games rather than play physical games. Up-to-the-minute technology is probably the main reason why

people

do not have sufficient

time

to

exercise

these days.

On the other hand

, there are several remedies to tackle

this

situation.

First,

the government should reduce the working hours

people

work, so that

people

have adequate

time

for physical

exercise

.

Secondly

, individuals distribute properly their

time

. Since they expand a huge amount of

time

for

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the Internet

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, namely online games and entertainment. And

also

works that involve physical activity should be done by themselves rather than by robot. It is really crucial and practical for

people

.

To sum up

, because of many residents in modern areas living in busy cities, they have no

time

for physical

exercise

.

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working hours and do not spend a lot of

time

for

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technologies can tackle

this

issue.