MORE AND MORE PEOPLE TODAY ARE USING COMPUTERS AND ELECTRONIC DEVICES TO ACCESS INFORMATION. THEREFORE THERE IS NO NEED TO PRINT BOOKS, MAGAZINES AND NEWSPAPERS. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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In today's
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,world many people can find any information by means of digital phones and computers.
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human
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necessity for
books
and journals becoming less.
This
essay will argue why reading
books
and magazines in order to get information is entirely necessary for everyone. It is true that technology makes our life easier. Humans use more mobile phones and computers than reading newspapers. Indeed they do not waste a lot of time in order to find information compared to searching from
books
. On top of that social media has a variety of data with no boundary.
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is more cosy for people who are busy with their work. ,
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it has a negative side. It may bring damage our health ,especially with illnesses which are related to eyesight. Electron
books
can not develop
kid's
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imaginations as real
books
. It is different to hold
books
and watch interesting pictures and lose yourself in a good novel. Attitude for
books
never changes for bookworms. Children may be addicted to phones and their memory does not increase. On the other ,hand adults prefer reading the news in the newspaper.
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essay argued that the attitude toward printing
books
, newspapers and magazines decreasing
as a result
of developing technology. In my
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books
are an essential part of our life and we totally need them.
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