The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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the bar graph shows the difference in rainfall against temperature.precipitation increases gradually from May to June
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slowly declining in October and steeply down in December.
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essay will describe the date precisely here. as far as I am concerned the bar graph showed clearly rainfall slightly increases from January to March would be below 50,
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it doubled from April to May and would reach upto 100 as long as reaches to peak in July and August near about 350mm. on the other ,hand it gradually decreased from October about 50 mm of rainfall to December less than 20 mm. as for the climatic conditions temperature rise in the month of April may reach the level of 30 degrees Celcius
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it remains constant in the month of July, August and September at less than about 30 degrees Celcius. ,
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figures for temperature float similar in the months of December and January at about 20 degrees Celsius.
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