The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing Linking Words
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letter with regards to garbage collection issue in our area. I am Dinesh from sector B. I live just near to the sector B bus stand.
There are no recommended number of trash Linking Words
bins
in our area. So people are throwing the thrash randomly Use synonyms
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public places. Change preposition
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Moreover
, the trash Linking Words
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are not emptied regularly. In spite of multiple remainders to the local council, there are no improvements.
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Due to
garbage collection mismanagement, thrash is all over the place. Linking Words
This
will lead to health issues. Children and elders are at higher risk of contracting some serious disease.
The number of thrash Linking Words
bins
should be increased. We need to set up a monitoring in place to make sure all the trash Use synonyms
bins
are emptied frequently.
I eagerly look up to a positive reply from your end.
Yours faithfully,
DineshUse synonyms
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Some sentences need more coherence and linkers (e.g. 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' 'Therefore,') to improve the logical flow.
task achievement
Provide a bit more detail in describing how exactly the garbage issues are affecting daily life (e.g. smells, pests).
task achievement
The letter provides the necessary information about the problem and suggests a solution, fulfilling the requirements of the task.
coherence/cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and respectful.
coherence/cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which is well-executed.