Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, one of the severe problems in our society is

air

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pollution

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. Some

people

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argue that if the governments establish

car-free

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days

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, it will encourage

people

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to reduce using

cars

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and probably help alleviate

air

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pollution

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.

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, there are more persuasive opinions that if individuals use other transportation like

bicycles

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and subways, or

factories

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follow the environmental rules of the

environment

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, it will definitely help to mitigate

air

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pollution

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.

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with,

car-free

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days

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can play a pivotal role in reducing

air

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pollution

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. Indeed, these

days

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, the number of

cars

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is increasing dramatically. Those

cars

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are likely to emit harmful emissions into the

air

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and cause

further

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damage to the atmosphere

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, if the government set up

car-free

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days

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, it will prevent

people

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from using their own

cars

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frequently.

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, it will help mitigate serious

air

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pollution

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.

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, in South Korea, the authorities have been implementing

car-free

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days

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for 15 years, Indeed, a number of

people

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have been participating in it actively.

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, it will affect

air

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pollution

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positively.

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, there are more effective ways to mitigate

air

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pollution

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. First of all, individuals can use other transportation

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as

bicycles

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and subways

instead

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of using

cars

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. Taking them is not likely to be harmful to the

environment

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. Some companies encourage employees to take

bicycles

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to reduce

air

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pollution

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.

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this

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,

factories

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also

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can help to alleviate

air

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pollution

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. Interestingly, these

days

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, many

factories

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do not follow the policies of the government related to

air

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pollution

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when they throw waste away. Sometimes, they emit toxic gases and pollutants illegally and it is significantly detrimental to the

air

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environment

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. Some authorities even punish corporations which do not follow the laws of

pollution

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.

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means the

factories

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should be prioritized to protect our

air

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environment

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.

To sum up

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,

Although

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it is beneficial for

people

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to reduce

air

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pollution

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by participating in

car-free

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days

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, there are more useful ways to mitigate

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problem by

people

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who take

bicycles

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or subways and

factories

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which try to follow the rules of the government.