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your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. he would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend. in your email -describe where you lived when you were a student at the iniversity -recommend the best way for him to look for accomodation -warn him of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

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Dear Susan, I hope you are doing well. It is delightful news to hear from you about your studies. First of all, I would like to congratulate you.
According to
 your request, I can help you to find a place to stay
while
 doing your studies. When I was following my undergraduate degree, there was a nice and calm place to stay.
Additionally
, it was located within walking distance of my university. There is a number of ways to search for accommodation which are closer to the university premises.
However
, the most reliable method is the university notice board which has displayed nearby the students' union room.I would like to say, you can use the websites to complete your requirements. There are plenty of websites advertised regarding accommodation for students. When you find out a place for staying, you should be careful about paying advance payments for more than sei months.
In addition
 to that, you should have a visit to see what facilities they are going to provide. all the best Sanath
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