Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the use of modern
technology
is increasing among
people
. It is sometimes believed that communities are closing together
due to
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technology
,
while
other
people
argue that it is becoming
main
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reason for making
family
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families
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apart. In my opinion, I believe that
due to
new
technology
, families and friends are knowing more
to
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about
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each other, and their
relationship
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relationships
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become more strengthen. On the one hand, some
people
think that
people
who use modern
technology
have more
connected
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with each other and I agree. To commence with, it is highly likely that
people
,
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form
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from
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all around the world, are using modern applications to stay connected with each
others
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other
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.
For example
, in English Speaking course, some tutors
are provide
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a digital platform where students are connected with different pupils and share
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with each
others
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other
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.
Furthermore
,
latest
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technology
can
also
be useful for the elder communities to stay connected with their loved ones.
For instance
, a widow old lady can talk with her granddaughter, who is living in abroad,
from
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India.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that new
technology
is putting
people
far away from each
others
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other
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. In today's modern era, children are drawn to play online games, and they are even not think about their families. They always live their life. So, some parents believe that their children become far away from them
due to
technology
.
Therefore
, they stop their children to play computer games.
Furthermore
,
due to
modern
technology
, most employers say that their employees are giving resignation and will start their own
company
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companies
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or business.
For instance
, ChatGPT, one of the latest
technology
,
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has all knowledge about the world, and it can do anything for
people
. In conclusion,
while
people
may vary in their opinions between
merits
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the merits
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and demerits of modern
technology
, I think that
people
are knowing more
to
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each other after adapting it, and
stay
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updated with the latest trends.
However
, it will be
also
detrimental if
people
use it more continuously.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • communicate
  • social media
  • virtual meetings
  • global community
  • isolation
  • distract
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personal connections
  • dependency
  • technology addiction
  • digital divide
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