The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The provided line chart displays the average CO2 production per person in four different countries
such
as the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from the year 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen in the UK and Sweden, there was a considerable decrease in carbon dioxide
emission
throughout the period of time,
while
the amount of co2
emission
increased significantly in Italy and Portugal in the given years. In 1967, the UK produced the highest carbon dioxide with around 11 metric
tonnes
. After that, it continuously declined till 2007 and stood at nearly 9 metric
tonnes
which is still at the top. In Sweden, average CO2
emission
amounted around just above 8 metric
tonnes
in the year 1967,
then
the rate of
emission
rose by nearly 2 metric
tonnes
and reached just above 10 metric
tonnes
in 1977. There was a steep decrease observed in co2 emissions from 1977 to 2007 which is around just below 6 metric
tonnes
. In Italy, the average rate of co2
emission
grew throughout the period when it began with just 4 metric
tonnes
, it doubled
at the end
of the year.
Lastly
, In Portugal, the rate of carbon dioxide produced was around just below 2 metric
tonnes
and
then
, it significantly increased till 1997 which is nearly 5 metric
tonnes
and after ,that it remained stable till 2007.
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