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Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Madhur Bathla. I am writing
this
 letter with reference to the article you recently published, and I would like to share my experience with the book which I have recently read and the influence it had on me post-completion. The edition briefed about a young man and the hardships he went through since he was a child, and how
such
 hard work builds him into an extremely strong and talented young individual who is achieving success in growth. I grasp a lot of lessons to implement and become a better individual in handling life's toughest situations and becoming a better person every day.
Moreover
, the novel helped me to take risks in lives to climb the ladder of success. Nowadays, the young generation would prefer to read and get influenced by
such
 content available.
Moreover
, the chapters of the book will showcase to them the reality of life, they would learn a sense of responsibility without even moving an inch. I hope you would add
this
 book to your article. Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla
Submitted by madhur.bathla on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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