Some people say that all mobile/cell phone conversations should be banned in public and crowded places. Others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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The usage of electronic gadgets
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as mobile or cell
phones
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has now become a regular activity in public areas
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at home. It has been debated that talking on cell
phones
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should be prohibited in places of large gatherings
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some suggest that it's totally fine to
use
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them when people are around.In my opinion,to some ,extent
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feel its
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is unnecessary in public and one should avoid it as much as possible. In
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,essay I will discuss both views and elaborate on my opinion.
firstly
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, mobile
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are not just our means of entertainment but rather they are an important source of connecting to other people. For ,example if we want to inquire about someone where he is or even if we want to discuss something we simply call him to get in touch.
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, we can find out particular locations on our journey.
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,by using Google Maps one can estimate how much time he is required to reach his destination and what best route he can take to avoid congestion.In
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way,it is all good to
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phones
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in crowded places when needed.
on the other hand
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, excessively using cell
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at get-togethers or around family makes you cut off from the surrounding and you can't focus properly or stay connected to your surrounding.,
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it can be more dangerous if you are driving which can end up in a serious accident.
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it may cause someone offended too if you are giving less attention and rather more interested in using the phone.
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,if you visit your grandparents and start using your phone ,they will naturally feel unimportant and left out. So, the
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of
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is sometimes very inappropriate if surrounded by people.
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this
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, despite their beneficial uses, mobile
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are still regarded to be excessively used in public and one should be careful and limited
while
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using them for some important tasks.
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