The table upward displays the planned spendings over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised on sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a year as the projects are commenced.
The table upward displays the planned
spendings
over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised Fix the agreement mistake
spending
on
sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a Change preposition
in
year
as the projects are commenced.
As can be seen the
from the table ,costings in Correct article usage
apply
South-east
Asia expected highly (50 Correct your spelling
Southeast
million
) than in the rest of continents
in the Correct article usage
the continents
year
of
four and equal numbers of payments Change preposition
apply
is
forecasted for salaries.
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are
For instance
,calculated expenditure for the first year
for South-east
Asia is rated precisely thirty Correct your spelling
Southeast
million
,wheras
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whereas
the
twenty Correct article usage
apply
million
accounts for Central America
. Despite the lofty costing
for the first Replace the word
cost
year
of Central America
,in the fifth yearit
will Correct your spelling
year
year it
dicrease
to five Correct your spelling
decrease
increase
million
. 12 million
dollar
will Change to a plural noun
dollars
outlaid
for Central Change the verb form
outlay
be outlaid
America
in second
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the second
year
more as apposed
to West Africa(7.5 Correct your spelling
opposed
million
). By contrast
, both Central America
and West Africa investments in the year
of
3 and 4 will predictably stay Change preposition
apply
same
; two and Correct article usage
the same
half
and five Change the article
a half
million
respectively.
It is clear from the pie chart that,half of the percentage of spending is for salary
section . One in ten money will Correct article usage
the salary
dissapate
to office expenses as Correct your spelling
dissipate
similarly
traning
will.(10%)Nearly a third of the expenditure will be outlaid to set-up costs .Correct your spelling
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