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The table upward displays the planned spendings over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised on sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a year as the projects are commenced.

The table upward displays the planned spendings over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised on sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a year as the projects are commenced.
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The table upward displays the planned
spendings
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spending
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 over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised
on
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in
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 sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a
year
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 as the projects are commenced. As can be seen
the
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from the table ,costings in
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia expected highly (50
million
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) than in the rest of
continents
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the continents
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 in the
year
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of
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four and equal numbers of payments
is
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 forecasted for salaries.
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,calculated expenditure for the first
year
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 for
South-east
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Southeast
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 Asia is rated precisely thirty
million
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 ,
wheras
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whereas
the
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twenty
million
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 accounts for Central
America
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. Despite the lofty
costing
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 for the first
year
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 of Central
America
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 ,in the fifth
yearit
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year
year it
 will
dicrease
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decrease
increase
 to five
million
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. 12
million
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dollar
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 will
outlaid
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outlay
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 for Central
America
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 in
second
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year
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 more as
apposed
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opposed
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 to West Africa(7.5
million
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).
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, both Central
America
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 and West Africa investments in the
year
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of
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3 and 4 will predictably stay
same
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 ; two and
half
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 and five
million
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 respectively. It is clear from the pie chart that,half of the percentage of spending is for
salary
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the salary
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 section . One in ten money will
dissapate
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dissipate
 to office expenses as
similarly
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traning
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training
 will.(10%)Nearly a third of the expenditure will be outlaid to set-up costs .
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, million, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "displays" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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