The table upward displays the planned spendings over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised on sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a year as the projects are commenced.

The table upward displays the planned spendings over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised on sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates 

the anticipated investment for a year as the projects are commenced.
The table upward displays the planned
spendings
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over the next five years for three environmental projects specialised
on
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sustainable forestry. The pie chart illustrates the anticipated investment for a
year
as the projects are commenced. As can be seen
the
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from the table ,costings in
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Southeast
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Asia expected highly (50
million
) than in the rest of
continents
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in the
year
of
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four and equal numbers of payments
is
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forecasted for salaries.
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,calculated expenditure for the first
year
for
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Asia is rated precisely thirty
million
,
wheras
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whereas
the
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twenty
million
accounts for Central
America
. Despite the lofty
costing
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for the first
year
of Central
America
,in the fifth
yearit
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year
year it
will
dicrease
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decrease
increase
to five
million
. 12
million
dollar
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will
outlaid
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for Central
America
in
second
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year
more as
apposed
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to West Africa(7.5
million
).
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, both Central
America
and West Africa investments in the
year
of
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3 and 4 will predictably stay
same
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; two and
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and five
million
respectively. It is clear from the pie chart that,half of the percentage of spending is for
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section . One in ten money will
dissapate
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dissipate
to office expenses as
similarly
traning
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training
will.(10%)Nearly a third of the expenditure will be outlaid to set-up costs .
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