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A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job

#company #job #salary #gain #work #manager #-introduce #-tell #department #-describe #expectation
Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. My name is Tajinder Singh. I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in the latest job offered by your organization as a part-time employee. Currently, I am in the
last
 semester of my master’s degree in software engineering. To talk about my professional background, I have worked in various firms during my
last
 three internships as an assistant software engineer.
Furthermore
, I
also
 have deep knowledge of different languages required for software development
such
 as Java, Python and C++. Having experience in the development sector, I would like to apply for a temporary job in computer programming as you are developing a new product. My previous experience and skills will help you complete the project before the deadline. As a part-time employee, I would like to work five days a week because I have classes every weekend. I hope
this
 job will add some quality experience to my resume.
Moreover
, I would
also
 like to hear more about the work culture of your organization. Yours Faithfully, TS
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and develops that idea sufficiently with relevant details.
coherence cohesion
Try to use a range of cohesive devices appropriately to better link ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
Make sure to fully address all parts of the task, elaborating on how your skills align with the specific job expectations.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent tone suitable for the formality of the letter and the relationship with the recipient.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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