A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. My name is Tajinder Singh. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in the latest job offered by your organization as a part-time employee. Currently, I am in the

last

semester of my master’s degree in software engineering. To talk about my professional background, I have worked in various firms during my

last

three internships as an assistant software engineer.

Furthermore

, I

also

have deep knowledge of different languages required for software development

such

as Java, Python and C++. Having experience in the development sector, I would like to apply for a temporary job in computer programming as you are developing a new product. My previous experience and skills will help you complete the project before the deadline. As a part-time employee, I would like to work five days a week because I have classes every weekend. I hope

this

job will add some quality experience to my resume.

Moreover

, I would

also

like to hear more about the work culture of your organization. Yours Faithfully, TS

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Sat Dec 02 2023

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coherence cohesion

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coherence cohesion

Try to use a range of cohesive devices appropriately to better link ideas and paragraphs.

task achievement

Make sure to fully address all parts of the task, elaborating on how your skills align with the specific job expectations.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent tone suitable for the formality of the letter and the relationship with the recipient.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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