Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Since the day we began to study past at the school, I asked myself why we are studying
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as a study material became the object of discussion among people, their opinion was always controversial.I think
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is an inseparable part of our personality.sometimes people argue that when we look precisely at the historical books ,we saw that humankind was always repeating his mistakes.even when he read
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more carefully. From that point of view,they realised that there weren't any benefits from historical understanding. For instance,people always are going through wars even though they previously knew their outcome.
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helped and will help us to see what the ancient ancestors built and discovered from their experiences ,
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information without
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we could never get. In
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,regards we are standing here on the top dedicated to the entire world for our desires in my opinion all of these belong partially at least to
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. In the bottom line , I will say that
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we gain little knowledge from
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, without
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we could never proceed. ,
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we will lose a huge part of our identity.
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gave us the pillars on which we will stand and with its helpful ,information we progressed to our modernity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • insights
  • progression
  • values
  • beliefs
  • heritage
  • identity
  • applicable
  • biased
  • subjective
  • practical
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