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many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. what are the advantages and disadvantages of using the bicycle these days?

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Cycling has always been an
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eco mode of
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 to get to places.
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, not everyone is on board with the idea of getting to the destination using a
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. So why is
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 the case? In
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 essay, I am going to list the pros and cons of using the two-wheeler. As cities nowadays continue to grow and develop, the number of cars on the roads is constantly on the rise,
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 to the rising cost of petrol.
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,
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pedalling a
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 from one place to another seems like an economical and time-saving option, as the hassle of finding parking spaces and getting stuck in traffic jams would be eliminated.
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 activity not only can help reduce time wasted during traffic
congestions
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,
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 reduce pollution on the road, resulting in a greener and cleaner environment. It is obvious that cycling can bring in lots of advantages that benefit
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society
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, some are not convinced by the usage of the two-wheeler on the road as it has some disadvantages and limitations.
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this
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 transportation would mean sacrificing
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 amount of comfort.
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, one would have to endure the scorching hot sun or the pouring of rain
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 the unpredictability of the weather when pedalling. Actually, it is considered to be dangerous on a
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 during those weather conditions. Other modes of
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 like cars,
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 would offer shelter for the passengers and they would require less to no effort to travel toward their destination. Comfort and safety on the road would remain a priority for a portion of people and the downsides will always greatly outweigh the advantages of cycling. In conclusion, utilising a
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 as a mode of
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 definitely has people supporting or being against it.
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 of the day, it is up to
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decision
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 whether they prefer
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 over affordable
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 or the other way around.
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