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Some people think that all school students should learn a foreign language.Others,however,think that a student should be required to learn a foreign language if he or she does not have talent for it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the current education system,English is becoming more and more significant in courses.Many people think that it is a good phenomenon,but others think it is not necessary to learn a foreign expression with untalented admission. It is doubtful that some crowd who contain teachers in school and parents of kids think recruitment should learn English as a foreign
language
 in university.They believe that in
this
 globalised world,foreign
language
 is an important tool to understand other cultures of countries and have a high-quality conversation with foreign friends.
In addition
 to that,mastering a foreign
language
 will give
students
 more competitive than others when looking for jobs,
for example
,it can give a person more opportunities to get a foreign company workplace.
However
,some people who think a
student
 should not require to learn a foreign
language
 do have a point.They argue that
students
 who do not have any talent for it should be given in their own decisions on
this
 issue
according to
 their goals and interests.They
also
 claim that a foreign
language
 is not essential for the future success of
student
 life and career.So they do not need to make English compulsory for a
student
 to study at school if he has no talent or interest in it. Personally,I tend to side with those who believe that a
student
 should not be forced to learn a foreign
language
 and I think they should be allowed to have their own decisions to determine whether or not to study it.In the contemporary world,without foreign
language
 skills,
students
also
 can have a balanced development and become successful communities.I think foreign
language
 should be listed as an optional course at school.Without talent in a foreign
language
,
Students
 who do not learn it will have more effort in other subjects which appeals to them to study,and they will have more achievements in other courses which they choose.
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