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Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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In today’s modern generation, people tend to give more attention and respect to researchers and technology maestros than musicians and artists.
This
 essay completely agrees with that statement,
this
 is because
scientists
 and technology experts have contributed to society as they are developing the nation,
additionally
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 they make our everyday work easy with their new inventions, making our daily
life
 easy. On the one hand,
scientists
 are continuously working to help, support and develop their nation by contributing their precious time to their country by making weapons for their army and training them on how to use the new technological weapons.
For instance
,
scientists
 invent a defence mechanism for their army
so that
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to protect their nation from any attacks from another country.
On the other hand
,
Scientists
’ are continuously trying to make our everyday
life
 easy with their inventions which help us to perform our daily tasks peacefully without any difficulties. To give a clearer example,
scientists
 have invented mobile phones which have made communication easy compared to the older generation where communication was not simple. Even the invention of smartwatches has made our
life
this
 easy that we do not require to remove our phones from our
pocket
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 to answer our calls.
To conclude
 what has been said above, these are the few reasons why modern-day society gives more value to
scientists
 and technical experts as compared to musicians and artists
due to
 their inventions playing a major role in the country’s safety and improving people’s daily
life
.
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