Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot money on family celebrations while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both views.
Recently, it is debated by many that huge family income should be spent on celebrations
such
as weddings, birthdays, and anniversaries, which can create more bonds and unity among them, Linking Words
however
, others opine that it is a complete waste of resources and can bring Linking Words
such
family down financially and expose the bad folk. Linking Words
This
essay is going to be discussing both views.
The uniqueness of each family is their ability to show love and affection to Linking Words
one
another. Which is mostly shown through acknowledging and marking an individual's eventful moment. Celebrating Use synonyms
one
's birthday, convocation, graduation, and anniversaries has always been part of mankind even at death, some felt out when Use synonyms
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people
to be celebrated as it gives them a sense of belonging. Use synonyms
For instance
, research conducted recently by the Society for family circle shows that children that are being celebrated are more loving and caring in future compared with their counterpart who has fewer feelings for their loved ones. Linking Words
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can create a sense of humour and responsibility as the individual learns how to make a budget and save towards every event they plan to achieve since it is already their lifestyle.
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notion can lead to family spending unnecessarily, Linking Words
instead
of saving for future purposes. Linking Words
Firstly
, when families engage in too much spending on events and happenings around them, it can make others around them think they are wealthy and when they sort for help Linking Words
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, insecurities, which we are experiencing more often now, can expose Linking Words
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of my uncles was kidnapped after celebrating his son's birthday recently, the Use synonyms
people
thought he has much money and demanded excessively. Use synonyms
Lastly
, spending exorbitantly on parties can pose a financial burden to that home especially when they have Linking Words
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source of income and they will not be able to save for emergencies and future purposes.
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it is good to celebrate individuals within a home which can help them develop a Sense of humour and responsibility , Linking Words
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lead to financial hardship and kidnapping.Linking Words
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