Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money discuss both views.

Nowadays, few individuals

feels

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it is necessary for members of a family to lavish their income on family celebrations and some others think it's a waste of resources.

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essay will discuss more on both views and elaborate on a view with a reasonable conclusion. On

one

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hand, it is good to spend on family funfair

parties

especially when there is an event that's usually celebrated once in a lifetime

such

as wedding

parties

. People believe that wedding ceremonies

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once in a lifetime and if not we'll

celebrated

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now, they will have no other opportunity to do so later in the future, so in a bid to make the family happy, they spend

every

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of their earnings to the

last

on

such

party.

In addition

to that, a pregnant woman who has waited for years before giving birth to a child will

also

plan a very elaborate celebration for the entire family and friends because it is seen as a way of appreciating God for the miracle.

On the other hand

, some people

sees

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all

this

as wastage because some get themselves involved in loans and even emptying their bank savings in other to make their

parties

an elaborate one.

Also

, few

person

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also

spend

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all their earnings on

parties

just because they want to show off their wealth or probably because they don't want to be seen as being a poor fellow, so they do everything in their power to make their celebration a talk of town affair

for instance

, a person who loves attending friends' party

such

as wedding ceremonies to see how the couples are dressed, the event

center

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used and how the guest

are

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being taken care of would want to do same during her own

also

, not minding if

this

people she wants to follow after has the capacity or not and after the whole funfair, they now go back to the repayment of loans which might even cause troubles in the home as the amount that would be earned

at the end

of the month might not be enough to sustain the family. In conclusion,

over spending

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overspending

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on family celebrations is not a good idea because

their

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are other better things the money can be channelled into which will

also

benefit the family positively rather than doing things to please the masses by feeding them during funfair activities.