In some countries, University students live at home with their family while they study,whereas in other countries students attend University in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during University outweigh the disadvantages?

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in certain countries

University

Learners

study

from home throughout their

study

, other students prefer to

study

away from their families. In my own opinion,I would say living away from loved ones during

University

studies have enormous importance which is more than its demerits. Admittedly, there is no doubt that staying away from family to

study

at

University

has few downturns which can be a risk to life by

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from time to time to another city to gain a certificate

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allowing these young teenagers to travel long distance put their life in danger since

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In addition

, these teenagers can easily be convinced to join a bad company of friends in school since there is no supervision from the parents or guardians and what their lecturers can do is little.

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Nonetheless

,the benefits of

University

students studying away from home can not be overemphasized.

Firstly

, these teenagers tend to ¹18be more focused and serious about their studies when they stay away from home. Forsfvmy instance there won't be any form of distractions like watching movies, family outings,house chores etc, and they have enough time to

study

.

Also

, there has been a significant record of excellence attached to young people who

study

away from their comfort zone, a

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by a lecturer at the

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of South

Furthermore

, they tend to learn the culture and norms of other people which is different from their own

for example

a Nigerian student who is studying in England who learn the culture and ways of the British which is totally different from he is own and

this

will help him in future engagements. In conclusion, the benefits of

University

students studying away from their loved ones are enormous and

thus

worth it these

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increased concentration on reading, a high level of performance in class and cultural diversity.

Although

,in spite of that there are a few demerits including risking life and lack of supervision.