An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation  Write details about your visit  Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear John, I danced with joy when I received your letter with an invitation to join you in India. I would be delighted to come to see you and excited to experience the tradition and culture your country has to offer. As you know, I was planning

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from the beginning so I have prepared a detailed itinerary for

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visit. I would be departing from Sydney on 15th June and will land in Delhi on 17th June. I will be staying in the Taj Hotel for a couple of days to experience Delhi's crowd and delicacies. After that, I would take a train to come to Patna as I have heard a lot about

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journey from you.

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, I would like to visit some unknown places in Patna which no internet can describe , so please find some of those beautiful spots for me. You don't understand how happy you make me by asking me to come to visit you.

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, if you need anything from here please do not hesitate. See you soon. Hiral

solanki26hiralFri May 05 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
excitement
itinerary
arrival
accommodation
transportation
local customs
landmarks
culinary delights
get-together
pack essentials
cultural norms
sightseeing
reunion
recommendations
invaluable experience

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