Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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today*s
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today's
world, it is believed that many
people
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prefer to read
newspapers
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instead
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of getting
new
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news
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from other
media
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sources
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, there are
people
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who think that as the government can control
newspapers
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, they are
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the best
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way to get news. From my point of view, contemporary
media
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may be more interesting for some individuals because
they
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more independent sometimes. On the one hand,
newspapers
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are
reliable
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a reliable
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method to know what happened in the
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days in the world as
government
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the government
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a variety
ways
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of ways
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to check
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information
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that
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.
Moreover
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, there are
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some countries where all
newspapers
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should be checked by the ministers.
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, in North
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there are a plethora
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newspapers
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of newspapers
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, but no one may go to a shop without
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the control
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by
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of
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the government. In
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this
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cases
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, citizens who trust the
minicters
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ministers
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may be sure that they read only
truth
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.
On the other hand
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, in my opinion, new
media
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may be more helpful for
people
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who
prefere
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prefer
to read independent
sources
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.
Furthermore
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, most
of
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individuals, who like to read
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this
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these
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sources
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, understand that independent
information
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also
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should be checked.
However
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, in
this
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case,
people
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take
this
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responsibility.
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,
according to
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new research in the USA, most
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youngsters prefer to get news from
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media
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the media
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because
in
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on
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the
internet
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they can find the most independent and trustable
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To sum up
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, I think that using
media
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is the best way to get news because it gives you more different and independent
sources
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.
However
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, some
people
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prefere
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prefer
to read
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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newspapers
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as one of the most controlled
source
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sources
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of
information
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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