Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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today*s
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today's
world, it is believed that many
people
prefer to read
newspapers
instead
of getting
new
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news
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from other
media
sources
.
Thus
, there are
people
who think that as the government can control
newspapers
, they are
best
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the best
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way to get news. From my point of view, contemporary
media
may be more interesting for some individuals because
they
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more independent sometimes. On the one hand,
newspapers
are
reliable
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a reliable
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method to know what happened in the
last
days in the world as
government
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the government
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have
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a variety
ways
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of ways
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to check
information
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the information
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that
posted
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is posted
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.
Moreover
, there are
a
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some countries where all
newspapers
should be checked by the ministers.
For instance
, in North
Korea
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,Korea
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there are a plethora
newspapers
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of newspapers
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, but no one may go to a shop without
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the control
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by
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of
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the government. In
this
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cases
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, citizens who trust the
minicters
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ministers
minister
may be sure that they read only
truth
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the truth
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.
On the other hand
, in my opinion, new
media
may be more helpful for
people
who
prefere
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prefer
to read independent
sources
.
Furthermore
, most
of
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individuals, who like to read
this
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these
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sources
, understand that independent
information
also
should be checked.
However
, in
this
case,
people
take
this
responsibility.
For example
,
according to
new research in the USA, most
of
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youngsters prefer to get news from
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the media
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because
in
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on
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the
internet
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Internet
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they can find the most independent and trustable
information
.
To sum up
, I think that using
media
is the best way to get news because it gives you more different and independent
sources
.
However
, some
people
prefere
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prefer
to read
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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newspapers
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as one of the most controlled
source
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sources
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of
information
.
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  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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