The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The bar chart and table demonstrate the income and average weekly working
hours
for several occupations in the UK. In general, it can be seen that in the UK, most professions gain a wage raise after three years of experience
whereas
there is a significant gap in average weekly working
hours
among careers, with teachers and firefighters having substantially higher weekly working
hours
than underground drivers. Regarding
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the bar chart, underground drivers
recieve
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receive
the highest starting income of 50,000
pounds
and a salary increase to nearly 51,000
pounds
after three years. Nurses,
on the other hand
, have the lowest earnings, starting at around 17,000
pounds
and rising to over 19,000
pounds
after three years. Police officer's salaries remain relatively stable during the three-year period, hovering around 22,000
poinds
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pounds
points
.
According to
the statistic in the table, teachers and firefighters spend the most weekly
hours
at work, both averaging 55
hours
per week.
In contrast
, underground drivers put in the lowest
hours
per week, clocking in at just 36
hours
on average.
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