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Space exploration is a waste of money. Agree or disagree?

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Space has been known as one of the most mysterious subjects that someone can bring up since it appears that human beings have only explored roughly 4
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 for many years there have been many journeys to other planets in hopes of inspecting something we haven’t before,
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 should be noted that these explorations come at an enormous cost but low impact and for that reason, some individuals believe that organizations should not waste money on
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 state if it’s true or false. To start,
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 might not align with the opinions of most people in the world, my thoughts about
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 dispute are that it is incorrect. One thing that everyone has to acknowledge is that contrary to popular belief, investigating the cosmos may not be as costly as people think it is,
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, the budget of NASA was 21 billion
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 year which is an insignificant amount compared to the US government. Other than that, there are many benefits to the economy of the area as well since
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 develops technology and encourages communities to work in highly skilled jobs.
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, these adventures can
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 support education since most locations outside of our planet Earth might have different physics that we can learn and teach to others.
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, recently some countries have been having material shortages, and in some countries
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 as Neptune, these substances are effortlessly found and could be utilized.
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, some of the commonly believed theories may not be as dramatic and damaging to us as some might think and the benefits outweigh these.
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