You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent

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Dear Sir or Madam The reason why I am writing

this

letter to you is that I changed my job and my family members are going to Canada from China and we need a new apartment in the centre of Toronto. At the outset, I found a new office seat near the University of Toronto. For the reason of going to my new job fast,I want to buy a new home near there.

Additionally

although

I have 2 sons,who study in kindergarten, I am not focusing on houses near kindergarten. Because I and my wife have a driving license.

While

we searching a house with free parking for our two cars. Eventually,we are looking for an apartment with three bedrooms: one for me and my wife,a second for my children and the

last

one for guests, a big kitchen,because I am keen on cooking. If it has a barbeque and its own boiler, it will be great. I hope you can find a home with these requirements in the centre of the city.I am waiting for your reply letter as soon as possible because we will fly to Toronto after two weeks. Yours faithfully, Kim Chin In

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Coherence and Cohesion

To enhance coherence, consider organizing your ideas into separate paragraphs with each paragraph focusing on a single idea.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure a clear logical progression of ideas throughout the letter by linking sections more intuitively.

Task Achievement

Your letter effectively addresses the task by clearly stating your family's need to find a home in Toronto, specifying your requirements.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal request, maintaining politeness and clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter includes a proper greeting and closing which is essential in formal correspondence.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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