You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent
Dear Sir or Madam
The reason why I am writing
this
letter to you is that I changed my job and my family members are going to Canada from China and we need a new apartment in the centre of Toronto.
At the outset, I found a new office seat near the University of Toronto. For the reason of going to my new job fast,I want to buy a new home near there. Additionally
,although
I have 2 sons,who study in kindergarten, I am not focusing on houses near kindergarten. Because I and my wife have a driving license. While
we searching a house with free parking for our two cars.
Eventually,we are looking for an apartment with three bedrooms: one for me and my wife,a second for my children and the last
one for guests, a big kitchen,because I am keen on cooking. If it has a barbeque and its own boiler, it will be great.
I hope you can find a home with these requirements in the centre of the city.I am waiting for your reply letter as soon as possible because we will fly to Toronto after two weeks.
Yours faithfully,
Kim Chin InSubmitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure a clear logical progression of ideas throughout the letter by linking sections more intuitively.
Task Achievement
Your letter effectively addresses the task by clearly stating your family's need to find a home in Toronto, specifying your requirements.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for a formal request, maintaining politeness and clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter includes a proper greeting and closing which is essential in formal correspondence.