Water pollution has been an increasing problem over the last few decades. What causes water pollution? How can we prevent this problem?

In today's
world
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it is common to see that a
lot
of countries face the problem of
water
pollution. There are a
lot
of factories that throw away their exhaust fumes in the
water
. In
this
essay
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I will discuss the reasons for
water
pollution and suggest some ways how to solve them. Nowadays
people
build and open a
lot
of new places,
such
as technology or engineering factories, which produce fumes that affected not only the air but the
water
too.
For instance
, some technical equipment can produce chemical things that are very dangerous and poisonous, so
water
inhabitants will die because of breathing them. I think the way how factories can reduce their negative impact on
water
is by cleaning from dirty substances. On top of that,
people
enjoy having a rest near the sea, rivers or lakes. Usually,
such
entertainment supports eating a
lot
of food which is packed in plastic bags. After having a great time,
people
tend to leave their rubbish or just throw it away in the
water
. So, we all know that
,
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turtles usually eat plastic
due to
their confusing plastic bags for jellyfish.
Water
's inhabitants can not see the difference and will often eat the bag, which gets stuck in their stomachs.
Therefore
, they can not breathe and die. In my opinion, we can collect our garbage by ourselves because it does not take a
lot
of time but saves plenty of turtle's life.
To conclude
, I would like to say that the problem with
water
pollution is increasing every day. Only if
people
start to understand that their actions will have a negative impact on their life in the nearest future, the situation can get better.
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  • Toxic substances
  • Eutrophication
  • Algae blooms
  • Pathogens
  • Nutrients
  • Organic matter
  • Marine environments
  • Coastal ecosystems
  • Microplastics
  • Food chain
  • Hazardous chemicals
  • Mining activities
  • Industrial waste
  • Agricultural runoff
  • Sewage and wastewater
  • Oil spills
  • Plastic pollution
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