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University students must pay all costs associated with their education, because it benefits mostly them individually rather than the whole society as whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Tertiary pupils should pay all
fees
 which are associated with their academics as it
benefits
 mostly them individually
instead
 of the nation. I agree with the given notion up to a large extent ,but I
also
 opine that it would benefit
to
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the nation as well. Which will be elaborated
in
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 the subsequent paragraphs. There are some reasons why a nation can acquire
benefits
 if
students
 pay all costs related to their education. The predominant one is that if pupils have cognizance about how to spend
money
then
 they could get success in their life by which country could be developed without
money
 no one can start their business. If anyone wants to commence their business
then
 they should have skills in
money
 management in an effective way.
Moreover
, it would be fruitful in decreasing health problems as parents could live their life for a long time.They would have not to worry about their children's
fees
. They can do their business in an effective way and
money
 can spend on other useful things
instead
 of
fees
.
However
, owing to numerous reasons why individuals can attain only
benefits
 if
students
 manage their
fees
 by
themself
.
Firstly
, when learners pay their
fees
 by
themself
, they could know the value of
money
 and they attain knowledge about how to spend
money
 on unnecessary things.
Secondly
,
students
 will do more study
as well as
 more work, for earning
money
. They could know about how to earn
money
 by doing a lot of work. It would be beneficial for them in the future. If they lavish their own
money
, they could do more study for getting high marks. In conclusion, I reiterated that paying all
fees
 related to a study by
students
themself
 can get benefit individually, but I
also
 believe that the country can
also
 attain
benefits
 if
students
 pay their
fees
 by
themself
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