The Chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The bar charts illustrate the

first

child

who was given birth by

women

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Considering

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age of them in Australia in 1966 and 1986 and 2006.

It is clear that

the younger generation of

women

who had their

first

childbirth was downtrend

in contrast

that the fluctuations of the

first

child

of

women

between 30 to 39 were increasing in the period of question.

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proportion of females under 19 years old who gave to their

first

child

declined significantly so that it was more than 30% in 1966

while

it stood at just about 10% in 2006.

Moreover

, in 2006 the number of

women

between 19-24 years old was half of them compared with that in 1996

as a result

it was more than 60% in 1996

then

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about

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35% and it was less than 30%

at the end

of the period of question.

In addition

the number of

women

who gave birth to their initial baby between 30 to 34 after a marginal rise between 1996 to 1986 increased sharply until 2006 and stood at just over 45% in 2006.

Besides

the

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proportion of

this

statistic in the 34-39 age group shows

the

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upward trend in 1966 about 8%

also

, 15% and 30% were for 1986 and 2006 respectively.

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the figure of

women

giving birth to their

first

child

between 25-30 and over 40 years has not significantly changed.