The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The line graph depicts how often
people
in the USA eat at fast
food
restaurants
from 2003 to 2013. As can be seen from the graph, a majority of Americans ate fast
food
at
restaurants
from once every week to once or twice every month. Meanwhile, only a minority reached there every day. To commence with, well under 35% of the surveyed American
people
in 2006 went to drive-in
restaurants
once a week, followed by
people
in 2003 (above 30%) and in 2013 (below 30%). Interestingly, the same percentage was repeated by
people
in 2013 who claimed to eat out once or twice a month, with the second most likely being the 2003’s
people
at exactly 30%. In comparison, only 25% of
people
in 2006 chose to eat at convenience
food
inns once monthly, which is 10% fewer than those who eat once weekly.
On the other hand
, the interviewed
people
in all periods were least likely to eat fast
food
on a daily basis or never try it previously. To be specific, those who did not go to processed
food
restaurants
on average were slightly more than the ones that ate there every day. As for the Americans eating convenience
food
daily, both
people
in 2006 and in 2013 were equally lower than those in 2003 (roughly 3% compared to around 4% sequentially).
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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