In some countries some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying thier own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place.

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nations

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certain individuals are leasing living homes,

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others are purchasing

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thier

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their

personal

apartments

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. I strongly disagree that renting accommodation is better than purchasing

one

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because purchasing accommodation promotes stability and

peace

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of

mind

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and

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generate

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money.

Owing

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a home is everyone's dream. For the head of the family to provide a living

apartment

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for the family is a dream come true.

Acquireing

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Acquiring

a personal house promotes stability and

peace

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of

mind

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as

one

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is no longer worried

of

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the many rules and regulations of house owners. It promotes relaxation, as

one

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is no longer worried

of

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about

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rents

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rent

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when the date is due, house owners are able to tour and expand in

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thier

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their

immediate surroundings, they can plant common food, and are unusually free knowing very well it is

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thier

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their

property.

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, my uncle developed high blood pressure

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his rent was due, but was medically fit when he purchased his personal

apartment

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and had

peace

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of

mind

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.

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, purchasing

personal

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home promotes stability and

peace

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of

mind

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Further more

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, procuring personal

apartment

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generate money as these

apartments

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can be put on lease and individuals can rent. These

apartments

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can

also

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be put on hire purchase and money is been paid yearly or monthly as the case

maybe

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thereby generating income for the family and the

the

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apply

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government, these

income

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incomes

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are used for the

benefits

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benefit

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of

the

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apply

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society.

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, the FCT Abuja government procured

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apartment

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apartments

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and these

apartments

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are leased out to individuals, the monies gotten from them are been used to provide basic infrastructure for the society.

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purchasing homes generates income. In conclusion, in recent

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some people are

subleting

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subletting

submitting

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thier

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their

condo,

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others are procuring them. I firmly oppose that

subleting

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subletting

homes

is

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of

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essence

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than procuring

one

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because it

aid

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firmness and

peace

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of

mind

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and

also

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give

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rise to funds.