The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart gives information about the average weekly spending for families in a particular country in the
years
1968 and 2018.
Overall
, the vast majority of family expenditure was spent on food in 1968, though the statistics declined in 2018.
However
, the inverse was true for housing, transport, and leisure, with only household goods remaining constant over the
years
. A significantly larger proportion of weekly income went on food in 1968, at 35% which was exactly twice as larger than the figure after five decades. A reverse pattern was seen in the spending on leisure, housing, and transport, showing upward trends from nearly 10% in 1968.
However
, expenditure on recreational activities witnessed the most significant increase among the three in 2018, reaching 23%. In marked contrast, other remaining categories either plateaued or declined. In both
years
, household goods represented an insignificant of &% of the budget,
whereas
the others all decreased. Among them, the gap in clothing and footwear between the two
years
was the most noticeable, which decreased by half, from 10%.
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