Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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of thought holds the belief that the earlier

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enter

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, the more success they will have in their academic endeavours.

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I am much more inclined to support the opposing idea that formal

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should start no younger than seven years old.

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essay will propose rationales for each of these arguments. Prominent proponents of early

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may argue that

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is very conducive to

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achieving academic achievements.

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is because the earlier

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can acquire a foundation of skills and knowledge in

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information-rich digital world, the more advantageous a position they will gain later. A prominent illustration of

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is the eagerness with which many Asian parents enrol their

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in

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at an early age in the belief that their

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will quickly acquire reading, numeracy, and language skills. They assert that

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's brains are like sponges, meaning that they are able to absorb

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knowledge effortlessly,

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getting a competitive edge when they reach higher

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and

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enter the

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market. Despite

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, I believe that delaying the commencement of

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benefits

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's physical and mental development. Numerous scientific studies indicate that youngsters who are severely pressed to study too early are prone to mental disorders

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as brain exhaustion, hyperactivity, and attention deficiency.

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, their physique may suffer

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of the stress associated with doing too much homework at

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formative age rather than engaging in physical activities with other youngsters. In the end, These adverse repercussions,

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can be counterintuitive, hampering the growth of a child. (Conclusion) In conclusion,

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many advocate for

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to begin

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as soon as possible for the underlying reason that it promotes academic success, I believe

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is an unwelcome trend, as parents should base their

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's

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on solid scientific evidence to avoid the dire consequences of poor mental and physical development, but

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be aware that the science is continually evolving