Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Others, however, believe that children should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

One

school

of thought holds the belief that the earlier

children

enter

school

, the more success they will have in their academic endeavours.

However

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I am much more inclined to support the opposing idea that formal

education

should start no younger than seven years old.

This

essay will propose rationales for each of these arguments. Prominent proponents of early

education

may argue that

this

is very conducive to

children

achieving academic achievements.

This

is because the earlier

children

can acquire a foundation of skills and knowledge in

this

information-rich digital world, the more advantageous a position they will gain later. A prominent illustration of

this

is the eagerness with which many Asian parents enrol their

children

in

school

at an early age in the belief that their

children

will quickly acquire reading, numeracy, and language skills. They assert that

children

's brains are like sponges, meaning that they are able to absorb

this

knowledge effortlessly,

and

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thus

getting a competitive edge when they reach higher

education

and

subsequently

enter the

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market. Despite

this

, I believe that delaying the commencement of

school

benefits

children

's physical and mental development. Numerous scientific studies indicate that youngsters who are severely pressed to study too early are prone to mental disorders

such

as brain exhaustion, hyperactivity, and attention deficiency.

Additionally

, their physique may suffer

as a result

of the stress associated with doing too much homework at

this

formative age rather than engaging in physical activities with other youngsters. In the end, These adverse repercussions,

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can be counterintuitive, hampering the growth of a child. (Conclusion) In conclusion,

while

many advocate for

children

to begin

school

as soon as possible for the underlying reason that it promotes academic success, I believe

this

is an unwelcome trend, as parents should base their

children

's

education

on solid scientific evidence to avoid the dire consequences of poor mental and physical development, but

also

be aware that the science is continually evolving