In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes here. What is your opinion about this?
In recent years, many
people
realize that with the development
of cities in our country, more and more cities are built
, but our Add a missing verb
being built
countryside
is vanishing. In my view, while
the
fast Correct article usage
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development
is important, the preservation of countryside
is more precious and crucial.
As we all Correct article usage
the countryside
known
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city
expansion has lots of benefits for the
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economy
growth, especially in developing Replace the word
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country
like China. Because more cities can bring more jobs and consumption, which can keep the market Fix the agreement mistake
countries
being
active. And we did have made really great results. Unnecessary verb
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For instance
, in the last
thirty years, Pudong
Area of Shanghai has changed into the most modern icon globally from a normal Correct article usage
the Pudong
countryside
, which we can be proud of, also
Shanghai has been one of the biggest city
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cities
around
the world.
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in
Although
the
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development
is crucial, I think the benefits of city
expansion can not outweigh the bad influences. Firstly
, it can decrease people
's happiness of
life. Change preposition
in
For example
, in Shanghai
if we want to get Add a comma
,Shanghai
touch
with any Change preposition
in touch
countryside
or natural scenery, we have to drive for 2 hours or above, which means our children can not grow up with natural explore
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that is
unhealthy for growth. Secondly
, for people
who always live in the countryside
, they may dislike the
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city
life, so all these big changes and new constructions may take their normal life or beautiful hometown away. Finally
, the constant construction can bring air pollution and noises
, which not only is bad for the environment, but Fix the agreement mistake
noise
also
cause really serious consequence
for Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
people
's health, like lungs'
disease.
In conclusion, Change noun form
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although
the
fast Correct article usage
apply
development
plays an important role in our country, but
for a better environment and Remove the conjunction
apply
higher
index of happiness, I hope we can balance the pros and cons.Correct article usage
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