You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend.

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Dear Kunal, It was great hearing from you. Congratulations! On becoming a Software Engineer with amazing grades. I understand you are confused
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to pursue a master’s degree or start working. Personally, I believe you should work. It has been more than 10 years you have been studying and I feel continuing the same would be a bit difficult. To get a higher degree, you need to do in-depth analysis and research.
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, I think it is best that you take some rest from
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. Exploring new opportunities would definitely help you in shaping your career. You could explore every position in the IT
industries
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and watch out for your interest. In
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stage, you could still learn and develop
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skills. I have known you for more than 10 years and your communication skills are extremely amazing. I would recommend you in exploring various seats in the digital marketing sector. Apart from that, you could
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look at
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and responsibilities of a project manager and maybe get yourself certified. Let’s meet
in-person
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in person
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in the upcoming weekend and discuss
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more in detail. Yours Sincerely, Anjali Patel
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Juncture
  • Firsthand
  • Practical skills
  • Theoretical focus
  • Financial independence
  • Career advancement
  • Real-world experience
  • Part-time studies
  • Online courses
  • Financial stability
  • Career goals
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